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Journey                     Reading the War Diaries and Letters of Edward Thomas

         What the good people of Alverstoke Gosport did in 1791                     Changing Shape

 

Journey

Coventry Cross Royal Naval museum Portsmouth 2007

 

I wonder what the blacksmith

would say if he knew the journey

we would take;

 

forged in medieval times,

iron nails to skew the roof beams

of Coventry Cathedral;

 

blown apart by German bombs

in 1940 — three relics,

rescued from the rubble,

 

fashioned into a cross,

given to HMS Coventry,

sunk in San Carlos water

 

by Argentine jets

in the Falklands war.

Raised from the seabed;

 

now displayed in a glass case,

inscription on the plinth

still shining —

 

Father forgive them…

 

 

Denise Bennett

published in Acumen 60, ISSN 0964-0304

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Reading the War Diaries and Letters of Edward Thomas

1st January  8th April, 1917

 

He tells

how he urged the soldiers not to be shy

about writing familiar letters home;

of a waitress kissing a captain

in a cafe at Nouvel Hotel;

of more fine snow, like sago.

 

He tells

of a long twilight lasting until six,

of setting the men to sort the stores,

overhauling guns -

of rain and troops

and deep, stiff mud.

 

He tells

of lark-song and letters,

gifts of sonnets and cake —

and a wet lilac bush

and the first time he heard

a thrush sing in France.

 

He tells

of shells holes,

blood-stained water

beer bottles among barbed wire,

partridges twanging in the field;

a gramophone playing Chopin —

 

and in his last letter

to his small, spectacled daughter Myfanwy

he tells her —

 

there are no peacocks

or swans but lots of little children

about your age, without specs

living in cottages;

reminds her of those Welsh lullabies

he used to sing at bedtime

in his final — Nos da

 

 

Denise Bennett

published in Envoi 153, ISSN  0013-9394

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What the good people of Alverstoke Gosport did in 1791

 For George Pink

 

Thinking about the money they could save

they sent children sent to a Manchester mill,

George Pink aged six was sold as a cotton slave.

 

Alverstoke men knew just how to behave,

promising paupers, orphans, a new skill.

Thinking about the money they would save

 

two sets of clothes and two guineas they gave

signing their fate at the stroke of a quill.

George Pink aged six was sold as a cotton slave,

 

worker as a piecer.  He had to be brave

crawling beneath machines to mend the twill.

Thinking about the money they would save

 

the merchants worked him to an early grave,

strapped him each time he flagged, beat him when ill,

George Pink aged six was sold as a cotton slave

 

did ten hour shifts in his dusty cave,

fluff in his lungs, noisy looms never still.

Thinking about the money they could save,

George Pink aged six was sold as a cotton slave.

 

 

Denise Bennett

published in Orbis 146

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Changing Shape

 

Her passport describes her

as five feet three

but that was fifty years ago

when she was as slim

as an iris

with a river of red hair.

 

Now the stem of her spine

has shrunk, she barely

measures four foot ten.

Slack flesh hangs

from her manicured hands

Her lillied feet are bunioned

 

and the fairytale hair

clings like white wisps

of sheep’s wool to her pink scalp.

She is doll-like,

swathed in cardigans

layered in petticoats and pleated skirts

 

and as I lift her

into the wheel chair

I feel the bud of her small body

closing.

 

Denise Bennett

Winner of the Hamish Canham Poetry Prize for the best poem to appear in the Poetry Society news letter 2004 (reprinted summer 2004)

 

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